Atomos's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Phils Invited]

Indeed

You have a knack at pulling off shorts... and you're good at making short cartoons as well. Good job.

Frogcloset responds:

oh you.

[DH: Welcome to Hell]

Not bad

Could use more of a story premise, but I guess that's not what you intended. But for your next animation, do a little story boarding, because your drawing isn't bad, just needs more of a premise.

demoninabottle responds:

thanks man! Yeah, needs a bit more work but there's always next episode!!

[Shame by the Slice]

Not bad

Nicely done. It would be nice to see sidetracks in the story so you can get to know the characters more, so that in turn what they do is more funny because you think "That's what they do". But regardless, I found myself laughing at various points throughout. All I can say to critique is work on the humor although it wasn't bad, I would just say give more reason to laugh. (i.e: awkard silences, off-beat mannerisms, and some jabs at our society) and I'll definitely be a fan of this until the end.

Good job. When is the next one being released.

BaconMask responds:

Those are some really thoughtful suggestions, and I completely agree! This episode kinda is what it is, and nothing gets too deep. But, once the characters are a little more firmly established I can definately inject some more sophisticated humor. I'm just not 100% on anyone's manerisms quite yet.

Thanks 1 billion for the review! And the next one should be out within two weeks.

[Overprotective]

yikes

needs major file compression, you also need some backgrounds, man, that gets dull without good backgrounds, and you're storyline, well... your storyline was lacking majorly in the "objective" department, other then that, kind of impressive

Sikes responds:

Hmm... Well thanks for the suggestions. I'll do what I can with the compression and I'll try to improve on backgrounds but that's probably my weakest link as far as drawing goes.

[Mystic Island 4]

....

The humor to this went down the shit machine, what happened? the first one was so entertaining; with this one my eyes just wandered and i coudlnt' even keep attention to it, it wasn't interesting at all to me, the first like 2 made sense, they didn't jump around different places with stupid crap going on, it's just retarded now.

GolemCC responds:

Stupid crap? What parts of this were stupid? If you could just be a little more specific, you could be helpful here, and not just insulting.

[Proper Use Of English]

ugh

you don't even know how to make it look like an old film it just likes like shit, its annoying as hell get rid of that crap cuz you don't know how to do it, it doesn't have all those STRIKES it has a line that goes across and speckles that bounc around not big bold paint brush strokes yo moron

Bacon-BuTTy responds:

At least i make the effort to make my own stuff, unlike a certain sombody.. who cud that be? hmm....

oh yeh, its YOU, you "Fuckoff" ;)

[Cocket the Fish]

LOL, what the hell :)

That's just funny dude. You are another good animator that came to Newgrounds.You have talent, and don't forget to keep submitting, Your work is appreciated! The sound quality wraps it all up together, All the sound you used is awesome, thats what makes a movie good, 70% is sound quality 20% graphics, 10% point/plot. You had it all. It was like a saturday morning cartoon. Oh and that song you used is also used often at http://www.fucksociety.ca for their Soft outer Crust series. Amazing movie, make more please!!! This was like a full length cartoon, it didn't even have to make sense, sine you had the best sounds, all sounds were included.

Add more to this series, and remember, i'm your number 1 fan, I like to talk to you sometime, I need help with my flash too. I'm one of the first to review too!

danlivas responds:

Thanks a lot man, it's people like you who really get me motivated to do more of what I love to do the most! You can contact me whenever you'd like by email and I would love to help with your flash. Thanks!