Atomos's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Metropolis Circuit]

Nice job

The story was lacking a little bit, but the overall animation was good.
I guess I was just looking for more foreshadowing to this story, although I wont' overlook the fact that it's a flash cartoon and I shouldn't be looking for too much story. But since it's #1 on top 50, I have to be a little critical.

Not bad though.

[Unforgotten Realms: Epi3]

nice

I like the teenage mutant ninja turtles music in the background. Very old school, reminds me of being a kid again heh

[Phils Invited]

Indeed

You have a knack at pulling off shorts... and you're good at making short cartoons as well. Good job.

Frogcloset responds:

oh you.

[Deep Impact !]

alright

make it longer, give it a story, and you'll be in the top 50

[Thwomps: The Movie]

not bad

Although your pronunciation of "pwn" is very irritating, as it is the most newbish way to say it.

[Super Mario bros Z ep 4 (old series)]

Nice job. Well done

Nice job. Well done

[Super Mario bros Z ep 3 (old series)]

Nice job. Well done

Nice job. Well done

[DH: Welcome to Hell]

Not bad

Could use more of a story premise, but I guess that's not what you intended. But for your next animation, do a little story boarding, because your drawing isn't bad, just needs more of a premise.

demoninabottle responds:

thanks man! Yeah, needs a bit more work but there's always next episode!!

[Shame by the Slice]

Not bad

Nicely done. It would be nice to see sidetracks in the story so you can get to know the characters more, so that in turn what they do is more funny because you think "That's what they do". But regardless, I found myself laughing at various points throughout. All I can say to critique is work on the humor although it wasn't bad, I would just say give more reason to laugh. (i.e: awkard silences, off-beat mannerisms, and some jabs at our society) and I'll definitely be a fan of this until the end.

Good job. When is the next one being released.

BaconMask responds:

Those are some really thoughtful suggestions, and I completely agree! This episode kinda is what it is, and nothing gets too deep. But, once the characters are a little more firmly established I can definately inject some more sophisticated humor. I'm just not 100% on anyone's manerisms quite yet.

Thanks 1 billion for the review! And the next one should be out within two weeks.

[Decline of Video Gaming 3]

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you spelt boldly wrong on the characters shirt which was rather distracting